I want to live in echos
To breath in the residue of feelings
the remnants of meanings
I want to exist in pure conviction
Once words are spoken
Silence is broken
Breathe
Breathe
Echo
Echo
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Journals Of Enreal 
I hear your echo,
divine piece,
outstanding talent!
Thanks Jingle!
I wonder if the echo is a memory?
It wouldn’t surprise me… valuable insight. Thank you naneeki
Happy Friday!
😉
You too!
Oh this is beautiful Enreal, I heard the sigh within the echo.
SE… i know you did. I’m happy it reached you
Good Poem…For good ill we are an echo in the lives of those we touch with our words and deeds…
Your words are still echoing..
Breathe.. and not speak..
so true…
Once words are spoken..Silence is broken
wonderful way of writing it…
keep it up 🙂
wow.. the poem echoes in my mind too.. a lovely verse here 🙂
my entry for the rally is The Butterfly Lover 🙂
So many great poems on here and yours has just topped them all so far. Thank you x
breathe breathe..love it 🙂
You said so much with so few words, i love this 🙂
I believe this poem has a voice that communicates with every reader.. beautiful! 🙂
Good poem.
I especially like the way you ended it.
Those last 4 lines
i’m not sure i agree with you… i sometimes think in my own case i’d like to shut out the echoes of voices and actions past 🙂 but i love the way you put this, and especially the last lines. strong piece.
Love the light and dark technique you used at the end! I love how you’ve made an echo and made it a place. It was rather brilliant.
Wow this is very well written. Short but it really hits…
Love it and the light and dark text you used puts strong force behind the poem. Good work!
Your words vibrantly breathing and loudly echoed into my heart and mind. Well done.
great poem – shows your conviction to your writing!!! take care.
hearing the echo.great poem
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cheers
Wow.. I love the way you ended this poem, brilliant!