What would say,
if I asked you to stay
And be with me
All of me
.
I Scream
Shout, Cry
I Lie
And one day soon,
I shall Die
.
So will you?
Stay, I mean
Until the time,
when I get tired of you
.
Would you tire of me?
With all the tears,
I can’t tell how many years.
For it could be mere days and weeks
I don’t know
I wish I did,
for then you would be
partially free
.
Please
I’m lost
Would you guide me
through this maze
It is haunting and real
And nothing heals
there is too much to feel
.
I rant
.
I can’t imagine where it began
Perhaps in the infinite end
Were you ever my friend
I can’t begin to descend
Until I know
.
This could be it.
This could be the beginning
Than Answer I chase
I’m on the edge of the world
lights coming and flowing
I know I am alone
Who shall carry this for me
if not by me
I know I am alone
.
Not even I
would stay
There is my answer
Journals Of Enreal 
This is a very deep and powerful piece with lots of twists and turns. I also love the photograph…not sure that is you…but the model is both beautiful and terrifying…almost werewolfish…and the idea of two images…where the one in the mirror might also chose not to stay. Great poem Enreal…of course commentary on a poem is always an empty shell relative to the poem itself.
I think you see more than most people would. poetry is as visual as a tear, the reasoning is the mystery.
thanks for seeing
“I’m on the edge of the world / lights coming and flowing” love it ^^
Thank you JB. Very Kind
Alone.
We are not meant to be really.
I am here.
When you read this – that moment – you are not alone.
And later – if you reply to me or speak to another friend?
Sorry – but you will not be alone – nor will they.
I am about to sleep and will dream as I always do – and you might be there.
Then – I will also not be alone.
Thank you.
L,L.
I have read this comment about ten times and am very grateful to know you. here or wherever here may be. Thank You L
“Not even I
Would stay”
Once again, your words are beautifully deep, Enreal – striking.
Thank You Tim, made me realize how lucky I am to have you read my work
You return a compliment when one is given. A rarity in this age. Thank you, Enreal, and you are most certainly welcome. 🙂
As usual, your thoughts are deep and beautiful.
The pain can be beautiful…atleast in words.
Very wise my friend, as always, a pleasure to hear your voice among mine
Emotions are fleeting. Relationships are fleeting. The Maze is fleeting. Life is fleeting. Interesting words. Interesting Philosophy. I’m glad I found and read them.
Great Thoughts! Thank you hawk
Sometimes, staying isn’t the answer… What are we? If not always coming and going… moving… even when we think we are staying… or that they are staying… nothing ever really stays… the same…
you move me, enreal.
thank you.
As you do so often. Thank you Sam… you are a brightness I am blessed to see
enreal,just got to know about you via timotheous (:) )and i must agree i love!and this piece right here just echoes with me.totally beautiful my dear and so,your follower i have become!
thank you imperfectous… thank you and welcome… to our world… hopefully the journey shall be as we make it…
To be conscious that you are ignorant is a great step to knowledge.
Benjamin Disraeli
Great quote Cuimbae!! welcome! and thank you for sharing