I
Hiding behind their luminescent veil
Eyes gather
Their senses fail
Do you see her?
Down on her knees
Do you feel her?
All the while ignoring her pleas.
She is here
Waiting for you
She is dying
But this you knew
For this she waited
Your heart
Your mind
She is within you
Or are you blind
While she cried
By your minds door
While she died
On your hearts floor
II
Dying
Breathing
Lying
Seeing
Matter not her eyes to you
The tears fragment a broken view
Then dawn and dusk collide
Pressing time and space aside
Leaving all to wonder why
It all began
When she cried
While she died
All who waited for her
Behind the veil
All who passed judgement
Their senses failed
III
Then she was born
Once more
Living for you
nevermore
Forgetting the senses
she never bore
Forgiving the reality
she swore
to
leave
behind
forever more
I wanted to read this a few times over the course of a few days…but working several nights in a row and will be too tired to follow through.
This is a very beautiful and sad piece…like one of those masterful classic music compositions that hit two chords at once…beauty/divine and human sorrow…the sublimity of a Greek tragedy.
TinCup… thank you for your time and I am honored for your words and voice to be added to this piece
Still have some energy in reserve…of course the sorrow here is with the divine entity…but I think the author has or had a sense of that divine Angel…and so the human sorrow still holds in my above comment.
Thank you so much 🙂
As always I love it….for me it reminded me of my heart….sometimes dying but always finding new life…starting new….
just was beautiful and touching to me….thanks
Summer… as always an honor to speak to your heart… blessings my friend