Such passion
Your eyes held true
Such fire
Your words revealed you
Such feeling
Your voice trembled
Such love
My heart was humbled
With such desire you waited
With such wonder I related
I wanted to believe
I wanted to see
Tragedy called
Love failed
Words tore
Hope paled
You
Who asked of me
You
Who spoke of me
You
Who left me
You
Who broke me
You
Who forsook me
Why You?
This might easily become one of my favorite poems, Enreal. I think you have perfectly captured something here — perhaps a feeling or perspective we all go through at one time or another — that I myself have deeply experienced but have so few and such poor words for. A wonderful poem!
Ouch. This hurts. I can imagine what it took to write this and I can remember being in the same place and all I can do is cringe.
great…really great
i love this writing…..
touching….
been there and done that to….LOL
bravo’
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