I SHALL BE
STILL AND BREATH
WAIT FOR ETERNITY
WAIT FOR A GLIMPSE
WHAT IS MEANT TO BE
EMPTY FOR WORDS
ALONE
UNFAMILIAR
UNINSPIRED
A BREEZE BLOWS
THE GENTLE WIND
CALM AND STILL
INSPIRED BENEATH THE SUN
AWAKEN
STILL DREAMS TO COME
STILL DREAMS TO COME
I have been feeling strange as of late
almost uninspired, yet the words flow… I know not from where… or for what purpose… they hold something… I know not what… I have been feeling strange
I am a dreamer so I think you said it perfectly in those last two lines..
still dreams to come…
as always summer rain, as always
thank you
i had to shout this out because you used capitals .. hope my mum didn’t mind 🙂
i hope your inspiration comes back soon x
thanks chloe 😀
I really needed this little piece right now, to remind myself that it is still out there…and dreams to come.
x
a beautiful comment, thank you for sharing your thoughts
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I can feel the breathing as I read this poem. I sighed and whispered the words. It was a good way to read it. Thank you for sharing it.
thank you for your vision Yousei…
I’ve been going through an odd block myself. Not that the words won’t come, but that I find it hard to pin them down. To know what I want out of them.
This is a wonderful piece. For one who is uninspired, it’s well thought out 🙂
Cheers,
Taylor
Taylor, I know exactly what you mean. thanks for sharing your thoughts… good luck on trying to figure out inspiration.. perhaps we can journey together
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very deep
dreams may come…strange is not bad…hope the muse finds you ready…
I’m a dreamer too..
And without dreams I think I’d die.. or live in a long nightmare..
Thanks for the beautiful poem 🙂
keep dreaming, it will come true.
I am looking at Rally week 3 post,
this piece comes to my sight,
Glad to find you again after 7 months of blogging…
join us today for another fun!
Happy Friday!
your work is fun and beautiful to read.